A powerful metal anthem inspired by Markiplier's film 'Iron Lung', 'Iron Surrender' dives deep into themes of desperation and fighting against the odds. With intense imagery and sharp rhymes, this song encapsulates a struggle for survival within the claustrophobia of despair. Feel the pressure build as the music takes you on a journey through vulnerability and strength, leaving a lasting impact.
No more light
No retreat
In this tomb where souls fear to meet?
Curse their evasion
Iron lungs, a cruel enslavement
Draw your last
Edict
Chiseled in stone, no room to tweak
It’ll drown you
Hold tight!
And scream for life!
Time to rise
Live or die
In this metal shell, you’ve crossed the line.
Weight of fate, hearts bleeding
Unravel the truth, you’re sinking
Draw your last
Edict
Chiseled in stone, no room to tweak
It’ll drown you
Hold tight!
And never let it go.
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This is a metal song inspired by Markiplier’s movie Iron Lung. I’ve written lyrics for a third chorus and want them to feel more powerful and professional, with sharper rhymes and compelling imagery, while keeping the same syllable count. Please enhance the lines for cleverness and impact, preserving the ones that already work, and make the rest rhyme more effectively. keep the syllable count identical to how i have it but try change every line KEEP SYLLABLE COUNT THE SAME
Here are the lyrics: "No more hope
No surprise
Inside this coffin who's left to die?
Fuck their mitigating
Iron lungs you're suffocating
Take your final
Decree
Signed on this marker of certainty
It’ll drown you
Hold on!
And try for more!
Time to fight
Do or die
Inside the tin-can you've crossed the line.
Pressure builds bloods breaching
Revealing the truth you’re sinking
Take your final
Decree
Signed on the marker of certainty
It’ll drown you
Holds on
And never lets you go."