Dive into the abyss with Iron Lung Requiem, a powerful metal anthem inspired by Markiplier’s cinematic experience. This track captures the essence of despair and unyielding spirit, echoing through haunting melodies and intense rhythms. Explore themes of claustrophobia and struggle, as every line draws you deeper into the dark narrative.
No more fate
No escape
Inside this coffin, it’s silence they shape?
Curse the abatement
Iron lungs, your grip is blatant.
Take your last
Respite
Scrawled on the plaque of your reckoning fight.
It’ll drown you
Hold tight!
And strive for light!
Time to clash
Stand your ground
In this metal tomb, you won't be bound.
Pressure mounts, hearts clashing
Unveiling the depths, your courage thrashing.
Take your last
Respite
Scrawled on the plaque of your reckoning fight.
It’ll drown you
Holds tight!
And never lets you go.
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This is a metal song inspired by Markiplier’s movie Iron Lung. I’ve written lyrics for a third chorus and want them to feel more powerful and professional, with sharper rhymes and compelling imagery, while keeping the same syllable count. Please enhance the lines for cleverness and impact, preserving the ones that already work, and make the rest rhyme more effectively. keep the syllable count identical to how i have it but try change every line Here are the lyrics: "No more hope
No surprise
Inside this coffin who's left to die?
Fuck their mitigating
Iron lungs you're suffocating
Take your final
Decree
Signed on this marker of certainty
It’ll drown you
Hold on!
And try for more!
Time to fight
Do or die
Inside the tin-can you've crossed the line.
Pressure builds bloods breaching
Revealing the truth you’re sinking
Take your final
Decree
Signed on the marker of certainty
It’ll drown you
Holds on
And never lets you go."